Working+Thesis

Putting on a successful Broadway musical requires time, effort, a lot of money, and several technical and business steps.

Revised: Although producing and performing a successful musical may seem easy, in actuality it takes time, money and effort, and several other technical and business aspects.

Let's keep working with the wording. I think you need to set up in your thesis the difference between the artistic and business side of production. It reads now as more of a fact than a thesis.

There are many business and artistic elements needed to produce a successful musical, including purchasing the rights, budgeting, and finding the right people to fill the necessary roles and jobs.